Draft Video Footage

I have attached my draft video footage below. I edited this video in premiere, however I had to use my cell phone because the program does not work on my laptop. I edited this video by adding title screens and closing footage. I uploaded a voiceover as well explaining what I am wearing and where all of the items shown are from. I gained the footage by every day taking a new video of what I was wearing for the day. I used the title tiles and voiceover effects to make the video. I want to rerecord the voiceover. I also am interested in playing around with the coloring of the video as well.